Ebbw Vale RFC, Premiership Fairytale

[robert rees]

http://lastwordonsports.com/2016/05/22/ ... fairytale/

My story on our rise to the top from our darkest days.

[html junkie]

Nice write up Rob, summing up the last 6 seasons well. I think some proof-reading is needed to get rid of some of the typos and grammatical glitches, as well as one or two 'clunky' turns of phrase. Keep at it though, your writing is very entertaining!

[robert rees]

Cheers.

I do try and proof read so I will try and work on spotting mistakes.

Hopefully time will help me develop a less clunky attitude to writing.

Thanks for feedback, glad it entertained you, cheers for reading.

[viewfromthestand]

Very interesting piece of writing Rob. It certainly tells the tale of how like the pheonix we rose from despair. I would second the comments from html junkie, I think you need to work on your punctuation and grammer. I enjoyed this article and look forward to your next.

[robert rees]

Cheers for feedback.

Will aim to work on spelling, punctuation and grammar as it seems a recurring theme.

Thanks for feedback and glad its a good tale ppl can enjoy.